After meeting with tutor and looking through the essay there are a few area that were highlighted and could be improved upon. First of all in the first main part when the topic of globalisation and cultural diversity comes up. It was made clear that there was a need to look at the circumstances that allowed for globalisation and cultural diversity to happen. Through post war immigration, the rise of consumerism and the decolonisation of Europe and wider afield.
Subsequently the book 'The Postmodern' By Simon Malpus was suggested as a important text.
In terms of writing the section on postmodernism needed to be improved and follow more of the structure that the Klein vs Legrain (globalisation) looked at. More analysis of each part is key.
Also discussed is the way quotes are used, and framing the writing more around it rather that large quotes.
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